I thought this poem was excellent ... i cant really put my finger on why .. theres a lil sumthing to it .. even tho its a traditional two line stanza .. rhyming poem .. it seems to stand out .. me LIKEY =) .. 5/5

I like the point you're making with this poem and I can identify with it! Great job!

That is absolutely exquisite, thats the best piece of urs i've read yet i loved it, it rhymes really well and i can tell you spent alot of time on it