OMI that is soo sad and thas a true story!!

Wow... That's amazing. It's beautiful. Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Oh wow, i have tears,thats so sad,i love the poem soo much,5/5

Aww... this is such a terribly sad poem... from the first stanza itself I got engrossed...
so wonderfully described...Each line unfurled deep pain and remorse...

well written....
keep writing..