1. I thought the "..." at the end of your last stanza were exactly right; you should have written another stanza. This poem doesn't seem complete. The only exception is if you purposefully left the ending open in order to symbolize any number of things, like being lost or fading away.

2. I'm not exactly sure why you decided to write the first stanza unrhymed and the rest of the stanzas as rhymed couplets. It is a bit disconcerning, and it makes me wonder as to how much the first stanza belongs in its current state. You should consider making it 2 different rhymed couplets with the same meaning and message.

I thought about what I could say to this one, only one thing has come to mind, so I hope you don't mind this short comment. Brilliant lines, truly.