Comments : My Pretty Pistol

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    DAMN~ You made me feel all fuzzy inside. lol Seriously, thanks so much for that comment...it does mean a lot to me.

    That's some serious stuff. Very creative...I love it! One of my favorites! Love IS a dangerous game and can damn sure feel like a pistol going through your heart. You put it down so well...I love the second stanza...it sets the whole poem..I think. Makes the reader more understand what you mean....amazing write Coonay! You're an amazing poet and an inspiration yourself! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awwwww! My pretty fabulous drumset queen! *Hugs tightly* I love you oh so much. :-). I hope I never, ever hurt you. You're so amazing sweetheart, you mean sooo much to me, you have no idea. :-). You know I'll hold your hand, and I won't let go. :-). You're the most extravagant (sp) drumset queen I will ever know, and the only one I ever want to know. This poem is absolutely stunning and I love it so much, almost as much as I love you. E> Hold on tight babe, can't wait to talk to you again. :-). EEEEEE> xoxoxo

    Love you always,
    Mortie.x.x.x.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hey, Tard. :D

    WOW!!! This completely blew my head to pieces! (but that's okay, i can always grow another one..lmao).

    I loved this lines!!

    "and your barrel is loaded with love"

    "you're killing me with kisses shaped as bullets"

    "My pretty pistol, you can blow up my brains,
    I'll still love you long after"

    MWAHA!

    You have brilliance in that tard of a mind, M'dearest! :D Awesomely done.

    Retardedly,

    //Ari\\