Excellent. Your description was great! "Vicious words”,” poisonous lies", "mournful chorus" were all great in expressing your feelings. Be careful with typos, for example "hear" in the first line. Also, did you mean to have commas in the line "Lonely depressed broken jealous", if you did, it is useful to put them in next time, simply because it helps to show what you mean.
Good Job! Keep writing, I want to read more.

This poem is great! the words describe everything perfectly!! i like uoer work and ill add you to my faves!! keep up the brill work! nd p.s thanx 4 checking out my work!! xxx

I adore the wording used in this...simply beautiful.
The opening stanza was very strong and really pulled me into the poem, and from there on it just got better.
I really enjoyed this.