That was my dad...

This is very sad. I really enjoyed reading this. It sucks though that someone had to drink and then after being not able to see there face anymore it really just sucks but you did an amazing job on this. keep it up. keep on writing love always and forever.

So sad...

This is sad.. but it happens more then anyone would think.. well done

Im really sry about that but good poem i love it. but agiain im sry bout ur friend

~*Aww sweetie im so srry if thats about someone you kno..but that was great i loved it it was very deep keep up he great work*~ XoXo

Aww, That sad. =[ Great poem though.. But maybe if you put them into stanza's.. And put more depth into it.. It could be even better. But.. I still liked it =] 5/5

`natalie xx

Sad but moving