I like this poem the best. It really gets 2 me. but u see how u just write and write u dont change lines sometime that can make a person read the poem over and over until they actually see what ya mean. i cant really TIP u but the poem really means something. and i like the part where u go "tell me u love me and please dont lie." thats heaps good. Cause well...im not sure why but it just gets 2 u.

I thank you for your admiring towards my poem that when i wrote it, it meant more 2 me then anything at that momment...but i would like to ask on your opion on what u think that this poem really means something? i mean i know what it mean but i would like to know your personal idea?
iam sorry that its taken me ages to answer bak...i know that ya werent expecting one but still...