by Spitfire
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I really like that its really good |
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This is a great poem.but it was hard to read with all the werid writting besides that it was awsome.5/5 |
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I don't think this is the best I've ever read. You seem have focussed mainly on rhyming, instead of how youo're actually feeling. Unless the rhymes come naturally, try writing a poem without rhyming and you'll find your point comes across much better. |
by Blue eyes~
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OMG u are just so good!! love always |
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Omg lovin ya writen u r soo inspirable .. ( if thats a word ) lol keep it up lovin it |