Comments : BROKEN heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I really like that its really good

    is true ?

    well i gave u a 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    This is a great poem.but it was hard to read with all the werid writting besides that it was awsome.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I don't think this is the best I've ever read. You seem have focussed mainly on rhyming, instead of how youo're actually feeling. Unless the rhymes come naturally, try writing a poem without rhyming and you'll find your point comes across much better.
    Take care of yourself
    -Laura.
    .x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Blue eyes~

    OMG u are just so good!! love always
    tenniel rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Heart Broken Angel

    Omg lovin ya writen u r soo inspirable .. ( if thats a word ) lol keep it up lovin it