Hmm i liked it alot but the rhyming was kinda scattered and stuff and it was kinda hard to follow. otherwise great job

Okay lets see...this was a good poem...im comletly confused though like poems arnt always meant to be understood but this one more less seemed like it was meant to tell a story correct me im wrong....so yes from what i read i believe you dont think your lover cares anymore, and you were also raped somewhere along the line? the rhyme scheme was off and on which i though disrupted the poems balance......so it could use some work but it was good none the less

This is a good poem, but i also found it rather difficult to follow