Comments : Whispers As You Walk On By

  • 18 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    'So if I whisper when I speak
    As tears roll down my face
    And if I seem a little weak
    And if I start to cry
    You just walk on by
    Please... just walk on by'

    I'm a bit worried by this hun...

    and also
    'Today I opened my eyes, now I see
    I've been alone...all along'

    you're never alone hun... I'm always going to be there for you

    Brilliant write hun :) loved it, just hoping you are alright though...

    Love you lots
    Oli
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Traci

    Excellent poem amazing keep writing....

    Traci

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    && Incase you forgot, I F U CK ING love my bumweed.
    && Incase I never said, I miss you.
    && Incase things seem so distant, I'm here.
    && Incase you worry, I'm safe.
    && Incase you need me, I'm here.
    && Incase I don't seem the same, I still understand.
    && Incase the chats are few and far between, I miss them too

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    How rood.
    It cut off the end of my post.
    It should've said..
    '&& Incase you forget through all my 'Incases'..I still love you.'
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by jescelle

    O hunnie, i loved it and it reminds me of myself but then im soooo sooooo worried about you,........i love you so much and you are NEVER.....NEVER alone ok? ilysm
    kit
    jescelle