God that was breathe taking, (I might have not spelled that right), but your poems are so full of emotion and not just anything out of your head, it seems like you really put alot of thought into your poems and grasp the readers attention, holding onto it till its finished, truely another great poem, your poetry is sort of addicting, once i read one.. i just want to read more, man your really talented, imagine how good you will be when your even older, again keep up the great work, 5/5

Great job i loved it

That was a really good poem. it got to me. keep up the writing!!

I love this one, :) your very talented

Oh it gave me chills.
such a sweet poem
it had a good flow and the rhyming didnt seem forced..excellent job

I liked the rhyme that you managed to keep throughout the entire poem, and the lovey-dovey emotions were very touching. Nice!

Good Writing!
beth

I liked this one.. theres not much else I can say about it other then well done

WOW!!! That was beautiful I hope one day I can feel a love like that and write poetry that breath taking. It was very mezmerizing I hated when it ended!!! It was like a really good book that you can't put down!!! Continue to write such amazing poetry!!