Lost love love not returned its a sad story that stays never in tune with love comes heartache and with heartache comes loves

mercy and grace give nothing and love takes none

great job keep it up heartache and love come hand in hand fist and fist can't have one without the other i like your style great job

I love it, it's so sweet, and so well written. Keep writing.

Yet again, pay no attention to anyone that rates you less than a 5!...This and the puppet one are my favorites. This one is so simple and sweet yet has so much depth to it....wonderful, wonderful job.

Love,
DarkSuicide

That was very sweet and it felt like u actually meant it. the rhythm was right on for the kind of poem it was. the ending was kinda sad. i didnt see it coming which i really liked.

This is a great poem and i can really relate to u...i love the way that u wrote it...i think u r really a sentimental guy...and i think thats good

Omg that is adorable. Great poem

Different from the two I read, good to see a diversity in the types of poems. Very nice write.

Some girl is rrally missing out, you sound like a really sweet person writing this poems.. good job
Take Care
Allison

You put a lot of emotion into this poem. Great job!

Oh this one is really so cool, not just good rhymes, it has a great rhythm as well. I truly like it.