Comments : I promise to change for you

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I have nothing to say except for he fact that it's...effing fantastic!

    "Even when we arn't together"

    It's an honest mistake, it's uppose to be "aren't"

    I have so many favourite stanza, I'll just list them all.

    "Can i deal with this fate?
    What if i cant stay strong?
    Is all that i deserve hate?
    My punishment for my wrong?"

    My favourite line in that one is "My punishment for my wrong?"

    "I will give it my all
    To try and change for you
    Though when i try to fly i fall
    I just cant stand to argue"

    My favourite line in this one is" Though when I try to fly I fall."

    Those two lines are my absolute favourite.

    Job well done, M'Lovely.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    I loved it! The rhyme and the words, all were awesome, really, it was super!