Great write. Even without the perfect flow it was good. I can sense that you too are sometimes overwhelmed with life. And things are so much easier when you can just get them down on paper. Know how you feel and great job.

I thought it flowed beautifully. i hope your alright, try not to hurt yourself...your so talented x

I love it !!

it really really good !!

i really really enjoyed it !!

GREAT JOB !!!~!!~!~!~

Awwwww gurl *hugsz* that poem was great ui wrotye it sdo well!! love ya

I really like it. 5/5

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I Loved it!!!!! I get what ur goin through and I can relate!!! I thought the flow was beautiful!!! Thank you for the comment it really ment alot!!! Plz read/comment on my other poems and I will do the same for you!!! Thanx agian Joclyn :)

I love it, great work hun! XxXx F_ _ k i n g love ya!