When you die you loose senses one by one and i like how you described that only in like a different way. i don't usually like dark poems but for some reason this one caught my eye.

Wow... Very dark. Truly amazing... I don't write dark poems, but I do have a vampire kind of poem. I liked this a lot!

I am truly impressed by this piece, nothing i've read compares to it on the level of evil it portrays, it's so very subtle, and sickening. Wonderfully crafted.