Comments : Paradise

  • 18 years ago

    by maudie

    Can i go? lol.......great job

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's so..... beautiful.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    How do i put it,
    Fantastic, nice, great, real, unique, fabulous, awesome....etc.

    It's just...WOW.

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Thanks for the comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    Good poem justin, I would take your advice if i had happieness to share with the world, but i dont. nothing ever gose the way i need it to go. I feel has though God has forgoten i exist, and pain is all i have ever felt, excpt for my baby girl, but even she was taken from me and put into a foster home.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Good poem.