Another excellent poem
i can really empathise
keep writing your so good! :D
xoxoxox
~*MaRy*~

Some of the rhymes I didn't like because they have been over used and the idea didn't seem to have formed very strongly throughout your poem. Not bad but I've seen you write much better.

Really good poem
At some parts the rhyme felt forced
but other then that it was really good.

VERY GOOD LIVED THIS POEM..