This was sweet, as love poems are. You used some good descriptions to tell of your love. As I did with your other poem, I feel the lines are forced. Poetry (rhymed) is written in a set way and because of this the poet needs to keep it as flowing and as "natural" as possible too. However, you seem to have jumbled up the words in order to get the ends to rhyme. Try non rhyming poetry, I think you will be very good at that.
Keep writing.

Your good at writing.

What do you want me to tell you? This was an impressive poem! The rhyming couplets were impressively efficient and truly wonderful. The descriptions and diction were excellent, and you make good use of images and few other literary devices. I would only like to see you arrange minor typographical errors: you forgot to capitalise the "I". In any case, this was great. You are truly talented. Keep it up!

This is beautiful... like any other love poem... impressed beyond thought !!

I thought it was very good it had a good rythm,your an awesome writer

Awww i love it. its sooo cute. the rhyming and everything was awesome.

Awwwwwww sooo cute!!!1 5/5

This is really cute. But i think i got a little lost in this poem like near the end parts but other then that you did an amazing job. I'll give you a 4 because i didn't really care for the last parts until you got to the last thing i have to say is i love you that part was great but other then that yeah. So anyway you did an amazing job though because it came from the heart. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
Ps:thanks for the comment.

Wow! Another good write!! once again you amazed me with the rhyming and that was very well written!! you definately did a good job! 5/5 for sure!

Very very good i think your vocab is a little shallow so the words you rhymed were easy and a bit boring, none the less great poem good form rhymed well great idea talented....4/5

Not a bad poem, though I'm not much into love poems...I do love the way you rhymed though, good job.

Forever I Remain,
DarkSuicide

5/5 Good, except I didn't like the ending all too much...Don't take it personal or nothing...Just being honest...lol...I think with your creativity you could have ended itbetter...Keep it Up..
Ash

O.K.... now there you go the rhyming in this one went well, although a few were "forced" thats o.k.
this line stood out at me ..."forever our heart and souls are locked and bound" ....now that was beautifly said!that deserves at least a 4

This is a great peom. loved it

It is such a sweet and romantic poem. I loved it. -sighs-