Ur good!!! keep it up ur sooooo much better than me!!

^Its funny how people say people are better than themselves, although poetry has diverse meanings, it doesnt all have to rhyme..or make sense. -Its what the author and reader think of it.

Anyways, that was really good. Im sorry you got hurt the way you did..but thats apart of life. You will soon learn from your mistakes, and others, and become a much better judge of people. (Im not trying to put you down..just giving some advice. Sorry if it sounds like im trying to degrade you.) I would rate this poem a 4. It has a nice flow to it. Good work! Hope to read more of your artistic talents!

-Jennifer.

Wow this was totally awesome! keep up the gr8 work....n-e-wayz 5/5 :)