Awwwww omg that is soooo sad!!!!!! :(:(:( but the poem is fantasic!!!!!! :) i hope u find sumone to love for ur self and who cares for your baby as much as u do and will do as good a job as the daddy even tho no one can compare to a real dad i geuss..... but i love your stuff keep it up :)

Very good and sad liked it 5/5

Excellent poem. Thanks for the comment. It really ment alot to me. I'm just getting started so i really want to know what ppl think of my poems. keep up the good work!

I'm sorry I know what its like to lose someone you love I;m so sorry..I love all your poems!

XOXOXO Shadow

Sh.i.t man dat sucks i got two kids twins little gurls almost two n i consider myself lucky cuz there daddy is still around n i love dem very much but if their daddy ever died...damn my life wouldnt b the same

Very well Written I Like it but to start of I had a babygirl and her name was brianna and unfortunately her and her mother were killed house fire i don't really want to go into detail but i kind of feel the way you feel so to speak. Great Poem Keep UP the Good work

Pretty good...
Keep on writing...i like that..

Cheer up :)