Wow, i seriouslly really liked it. theres something different in this poem, like i read alot of stuff like this but yours is really good. awesome job.

I did like this one.... keep it up

I really liked this one i felt it would be better in a four lined stanza format....

when i go to my dark place everything lights up when i see your face

that was my most favorite part

im not completly sure i could be totally wrong let me know....it kinda sounded like the *who* at the end should have been *whom* no biggie it just kinda flowed weird i thought but i suck at grammer so i could be way off...

amazing job, 5/5

Aww any friend would be honoured to read this I'm sure. Friends, real friends, are rare to have, but when you have them it's like nothing else. Good job.