Woah powerful poem m'dear! Especially liked these lines:

Strap on some balls and tell me you're hers.

So so true too!!

Brilliant poem hun, those perfect words just seem to come to you so naturally, you talented chick!

xxxYour lover ;-) lol lol

Loved it! Great job. You're a great writer.

Wow...

do u know the band senses fail??

That was awesome...i'm speechless

Ye i got nuffin 2 say eiver, unless u r actuily a gud rita.