Amazing write
keep it up.
alyssa*

The last section is my favourite, a little sense of hope in all you're feeling

you get across your feeling very well =]

-goes to add to favourties-

Hey, this is really good..i know what you mean...hang on tho..thingz get better...trust me..it mite take awhile...but they eventually do...loved this piece
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow ur poems are sooo great

Amazing that's how I feel I'm scared to open my heart again but time will heal comment on my new poems abused my mistake and I'm done