Comments : Our Love

  • :'(

    love you xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey bubs, i really enjoyed this poem! it has short lines in the stanzas which make this poem unique. I liked it because the meaning stayed throughout the whole poem. good job!

    my fav stanza was:

    A new girl came,
    and of course she was cute.
    Suddenly i was no one,
    so timid and mute.