Comments : Can no longer breathe

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    NOOOOOOOO!!!..i farking hate myself right now..i farking let you down..i honestly try to be here for you, but im such a failure i cnt even do that. i love you kit your my angel and bestie for life, miss talking to ya.

    xox
    noice poem
    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Thoughts drifting back and forth inside mt head
    memory's fade, the lights dim
    total darkness blinds my eyes
    my heart slows, it's finally time

    I think this sentence can be better, i can't tell you how, just read it again and see if you can change the words okey...just thought it doesn't sound right.