Firstly, thanks for your comment on my poem. secondly, this poems is rather good, i can definately say i enjoyed reading it. as i got to the end i was slightly disheartened because i wasn't it to continue. anyway, it was a great poem, it flowed really well. my favorite stanzer was stanzer two and i like closing line, partly because it's part of the title and partly because it was a good end. please read some more of mine, not many people vote or comment on them...i need all the help i can get, lol.
Brad

Dat was a great poem..a piece of advice..if this is true..don't pretend to b someone u r not just to make everyone else happy...think about urself too..datz what really matters!!
read some of my poems if u get a chance..n leave a comment or rate em..thanx

Cute and funny 2.. (but don't pretend 2 much LOL) tanx for the coment on BK... =)

Ps: don't tell no one but i like Mcdonalds better SHHHHHHHH! LOL =)

True Story!!!!!

This is justin's mom, that poem really touched me, i sent it to my 13 daughter who is having some problem's to let her know i understand that it isn't easy being her....Thankyou so much

Oops i meant 13 year old daughter

Wow.. Umm first off, that was very well written, second, yes my mom did send this to me, It was really sad, and I understand it completely, its really hard sometimes, and the only way to seem happy is by pretending to be, and everything that happens around the house, all the screaming and yelling, doesn't help any, but we just have to hang in there, things will someday get better and I guess we just need to look forward to the future, to the successful things in life that we will get the oppurtunity(sp?) to do, but again, great poem, I can relate to it and I liked the words you used, and the flow was very good, 5/5