I love the words and flow of it, would stand out alot more if it were arranged in some way...but I like the actual poem.

This is either my first or second fave of yours...Its hard to decide...Good Job...
5/5
Ash

Sad poem. I can see you put a lot of emotion into the poem and that came through. However I feel it could be improved, so please allow me to give suggestions. Of course you don't have to take them.

Maybe a more "poetical" format instead of a paragraph would read easier.
Also on the 5th line you said "know" and it should be "now."

I really did like the ending it really sent the pain out to the reader. With small alterations this poem will be perfect.