Short but nice, nice rhymes they go well together in my opinion, sorta insperational, 5/5 for you

Very well written,had a nice flow and rythm 5/5

I like this one..really nice..easy to read and very crative on this one..5/5 what the !@#$ Shawn hoskins says the same thing on every poem that he leaves a comment for.

I really like this poem... its very true... very well written too! 5/5

Amazing job. i really liked this poem alot and it's very true. it's like that saying life your life to the fullest because you just never know and you really have no time to be depressed but we are anyway. Anyway amazing job again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.