Comments : Victory

  • 17 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Hi Bhavin, this is a real nice one. wonder how i missed it before!

    i like your rhyme scheme and the way you describe it. very creatively done.

    sent u a mail by the way. did u get it?

    take care
    shobhana

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This poem is full of meaning. Reading it, it makes me take a good look at life. Great write, kel.