Wow
i loved this onw
tht was wot it was like here last night lol
loved it

love andrea xxxx

Gd stuff...agen lol bravoooo :) :P

Wow, this is very discribtive! I loved it! The floe was good and Its a good idea Just looking out the windo lol...keep it up I see your getting better in your work well done

lisa xxx

Excellent!!!!

"But now the worst is over
The best is yet to come
The pain has been defeated
By the rising sun"

...wow. keep it up!
-xXx-

Yea you really did this one well too 5/5 comparing weather to happiness and the rain oh i love poems about rain its so deep. yea... this poem is really good. your words fit together so easily and smooth.

Oh yes, I really hope hapiness will come soon! This is a poem, that is not only sad but it also gives hope. Which is great! Nice work

I like it alot...Deep mood !! 5/5