Comments : When i die

  • 18 years ago

    by josh mills

    Thanks for all of ur support im happy
    every one likes them im working on more for u to enjoy.
    with love

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    I really like this one it is Great

  • 18 years ago

    by clevername

    I really like this i can relate i like wen ppl write short poems that are really good but soemteims ppl dont thin kthat short poems can b good jsut cuz there short but thats not true obviously bc his one was fabuluos wonderful loved it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey great poem filled with so much emotions i loved it!you took the words out of me and how i feel....take care....love JoSiE.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    This is kinda how I felt... Nice poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    THIS IS A GOOD POEM...KEEP WRITING.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    This is great i cant really relate but i love how it is written short and to the point. oh and great rhyming

    keep up the good work

    -Kat

  • 17 years ago

    by Leona

    I feel the same way
    5/5 Great job

  • Wow this one was a little intense.but i like it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hinata

    This one is awesome I feel the same way.