Wow.. that was really good, you did an awesome job, had a nice flow and good description, 5/5

Wow. this is great. it tells such a clear story. the first stanza when comapring her hair to cinamon is exellenct. very well done indeed

Ruby

That was great poem. and thanx for the advice. every word on that poem just rolled out of the mouth and was beautiful but yet still informative.

Again.. EXCELLENT and i love your creativity... i love how i can just feel as if i was there, see it through your eyes! my favorite lines were
"I should've stopped at the first indication
She was too inviting, I couldn't hold back

Damn did it hurt, when she spoke these words
And verified clearly my predictions
It is now undeniably a fact
She's simply a beautiful affliction"

its exactly what i went through but a guy did that to me... i knew it wasnt going to happen , as much as i made myself believe it would because i wanted it, but it just didnt, because hes just one of those types, and you just cant change that! well please, write more poems and when u do, tell me so i can read them

Geez ur poems take a long time 2 read..lol. anyway, sry u didnt get a top place in my contest, but u are an excellent writer. this poem showd feeling very strongly...5/5 4 sure!
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow thats a wounderful poem i loved it:) keep up the great wrk

That's an excellent poem. That quoted part sounds like the conversation I had with my girl 3 girlfriends ago. She was a real heartbreaker. Girls are such a drag.

An outer beauty is good but an inner beauty is even better, guess we all find that out the hard way! great poem

Absolutely amazing!
I loved everything about this poem, starting with the flow. Great job on expressing your thoughts with the imagery you used. Perfect describing words:

"Her eyes exhibit a cinnamon brown glimmer
With sleek raspberry hair to compliment
She struck my curiosity with her bubble gum lips
So soft, so smooth, so lustrously slick"
^^this first stanza is what really stuck out the most for me. i really liked the way you started off catching my attention. i read this stanza and i wanted to read more. loved it

Also, your voice in this cries for praise =)
Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5