Comments : Thinking about you

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I liked it,it was different the way you wrote it

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "My Thoughts Wonder Around The Room."
    It should be "wander" not "wonder"

    "My Mind Is Roting Again."
    I think rotting has two 't's

    To speak for a moment about your poetry in general, I don't think you really need to capitalize each word, or end each line with a period. It can be slightly distracting for the reader, and can often cause problems concerning the flow of the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    First of all..I have to say...I love your last name..Plumador...*Shakes head* Fasinating, lol.
    Now, I loved this...it had a much better flow and I loved the purpose of the poem....such a wonderful job!

    Love
    DarkSuicide

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    5/5 good job loved it
    Becky
    xoxo