I'm sorry that she did you that way, she did you like my best friends mama says, "Use, Abuse, And Confuse." lol, you came across as the loving, caring, id-give-my-life-up-for-you kind of type and that's sweet. Sooner or later you will start to love again....you want my honest oponion? Don't take her back if she comes back because of all the pain it's caused. . . but that's just me. . . . sry if you don't agree. . . welp. . .it was a good poem and it had strong feelings in it and i'm sure if she was to read it she would know exactly how you feel.
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Hey thats a great poem i cant relly relate to it to thanks for the comment on my poems its kinda like we are alike we have been threw some of the things that each other have been threw sorry you had to be hurt bye her it hurts like nothing else hurts to lose some one that you really truly love but we learn from what we do n we just havve to learn to pick up the peaces that that one broke apart n show them that you dont need them there cuz your a better person now
your a great poet i hope that you will write more n put more on here
well untill the next time i here from you
always alana

You know i love all your poems, and this ones another bit of magic, well done xxxxx