I love this poem i wish there was more! ive alwayts loved the legends of the sirens, and im so glad someones managed to capture their beauty in words, so thanks.

I really liked this, it was good, beautifuly written !!! Great descriptions 2 !!
xxx cici xxx

Eeeh! Thank you :: bows happily:: I was just sitting around when a vision of the sea came to me...then the words took over!

Wow.. that was really good you did a very good job, I liked you choice of words and the whole structure and flow, you did an excellent job and I don't think you could have done any better on this, keep up the good work, 5/5

Short lines, but impressive meter. A good poem with some great original ideas. You were able to narrate the poem smoothly without unnecessary detail. Good job and display your emotions strongly.

Thank you everyone, I'm glad you gusy liked it.