Awesome poem....ur a great writer.thanx for ur comment on my poem and i'm kinda sorry that u could be the guy in my poem cuz that guy is sad. if u ever wanna talk e-mail me.

Great poem. Quite magnificent. You've put some very vivid images of being happy and leaving what doesn't matter behind you. Quite fond of this piece. With such an easy flow I felt quite compelled to read on! Great stuff

Awesome poem!

This one is my fav i dont know why but it is it is so great i love the flow and words
great job