Really good poem....its really touching and it sucks that its a true story...its hard to see someone go throught that hurt...and its hard when its to late to help them

Wow...was it someone you knew?...thats so sad but releative to some as well...keep it up n as always thanx for the comments...

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Aww thats so sad...
i wish this poem could go out to those who always push people..till they can't take it.
great poem...check out mine sometime...x xx

Its sad..but Laken and I like it. (laken=friend) I really know thats a problem with kids around the ages of 13-18..and it cant be saved..comment on some of mine..thanks for the new comment.

Lyz

Good poem 5/5
Yeah i do have a brother Matt..but you kinda live in like virginia..or someplace i dont remember lol yeah
Becky
xoxo

It's really sad but the flow is hard to follow. You should work on that.
Love always,
Riot xxx

Wow. so sad. 5/5.