Comments : Who could I be?

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    You are so right! Love has always been there and drives so much, causes so much pain and heal too. Without it, all the rest is in vain. This is brilliant poem. The only thing I would change would be the last line my friend. It is awkward...did you mean, "I'm in need...."? Very well written and captures so much.