At first I thought that he was in the hospital and you were mourning him, but as it was, I still liked it.
Also that you said I'd break something for you, and I thought you were talking about a vase or something, and then I realized that you probably meant a bone, or a heart... Nice.
Ok I've noticed you poem's stanza's are just a bunch of words thrown together. Try making each stanza the same size. It not only helps the reader read it better, it also makes it look more organized. Used capitolization and use commas, periods, ect. No critisism just advice.
Very well done though I really liked this poem. God Bless 4/5
Sorry I gave you a 4 I just couldn't really grasp the poem very well and it didn't really flow to me.