Great job
good poem
keep it up buddy

Im so cool

Hey i have lost a best friend to death i i know how it feel s trust me your not the only out there who feels like this i mean my best freind was stabbed and it felt like hell to go through that much pain trust me i know it is to lose someone who was so close to you and you cant bare to ive with out them trust me your not the only one

Such an emotional write, i really enjoyed it alot...
it was interesting...i liked this poem alot because it was not only like "she left me i must kill myself"
it was more bittersweet and it seemed like you were going through alot of pain when you wrote it...
i liked it though, it was very unique and refreshing. :]