Wow this poem was awesome babe....left breathless....woah....n-e-wayz 5/5!
-liZZie

Great job this one of the best poems i've ever read...seriously...i loved everything about it so i dont need to list them....great job!

how do u think they egnore their cries

dd you mean ignore?

Thats great
its awesome
i lvoe it
its kool
5/5

Hey sweets, please take care. I suppose poetry is one of the best ways to get to know a person because it's like reading their mind. This is very crushing, yet written beautifully. I haven't much more to say other than you deserve more out of this life.

~rolo