Comments : FaThEr FoRgIvE hEr

  • 18 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    Nice composition, Im sure it's a very fitting tribute to someone who appears to have been very special to you. Just remember that guilt and regrets are not the way forward, take care,
    xXxForesakenxXx

  • 16 years ago

    by haunted

    I love this poem of yours.
    It seems like a sequel to your other poem "The unknown Girl That Died".
    This one brought me to tears though.
    Very fine choice words even though they are simple.
    The simple ones mean the most.
    You won my heart with this poem!!
    LOVE IT!!!

    ~Qistina~