Comments : If only I could see you

  • 18 years ago

    by David McIntosh

    Wow ---

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Ariel Marie~*~

    Wow thats really good!ur quite talented!i can relate n a way,i am very sorry it has to be like this but just hang on and try not to stress on it!much luv

  • 18 years ago

    by becky potter

    I loved it its a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Keep up the love! great poem.

    sammi xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Great write.
    This is what happens
    night after night
    keeping in my tears
    is {always} a constant fight
    this happens to alot of people and i am no exception. This speaks a universal truth. good job!

    ~Anthony