Oh. what an amazing poem. seriously...it was so powerfull. i really like the last bit... "This melancholy pain rips me apart,
I try to think back right to the start.
They say there's always a trigger,
But the only trigger is under my finger.
Without life there is no pain,
Without guts, you cannot gain.
So I'll free myself of expectations,
Maybe tonight I'll find salvation.
Many may think that it isn't right,
But I'm sick of playing this game in spite.
This is right for me in my head,
Going to a better place that lies ahead."
and the ending. it was amazing, beautiful write take care huni xx
Wow.. that was a really good poem, it was really deep, and showed alot of emotion in it, had a great flow and amazing rhyming, it seems like you must've put alot of thought into it, and not just something at the top of your head, great job, and keep up the good work, 5/5
Hey hang in there i think we all know how youre feeling, and it sucks caz no one can really help..only you can help yourself really caz probaly noone around you knows how down youre feeling...hang in there though dont let people do this to you, rise above and show them how strong you are and when you suceed itll be no thanks to them take care xxx