Good. I could feel what you put into this. "Eyes glaring at me
I look back lovingly
I will survive I say in my mind, this will not be the end
He nods and I roll aside."
I like this.

I like this a lot, very dark, and I love the end, the feeling that you just continue on once the poem is finnished.
Well written
*VioletRaven*

I love the ddepth and energy form your poems. amazinggggggg...latas XXLISSA