It was okay... good job. My favorite stanza was:

"Stick the key in the car,
Start it up and leave,
Go as far as we can go,
When you're driving you're the star,"

~BJ~

This is so awesome. your poems are so great. you are so talented. you can see this by no matter what style you try to tackle you seem to do so well at it. its different from your others but its really great!