Sorry but that was really bad!!!!

you'll get better :)

lucy

Really? Because I loved it.

Then go somewhere else and live in the light...everything will be true...okey....

...do u mind checking out my poems....thanks...i'll see others later...

Ok who ever says this is a bad poem is a bad poet i under stand what your saying i think, stupidity is bliss not to know the imposobilitys and have fath in a life so meaningless

Oh....simple words, amazing result!

Ummm "u'll get better?" HELLO!?! She IS better! She's better than me! My work is junk compared to her's!