That was a wonderful poem...Flow and diction flawless. I have added you to my favourites as I really like your style. Im off to read your other poems.
Thank you for your kind words on my latest poem.

Kind regards
Hayley

He he poems
thanx suzie
u make me laugh
but thats me
remember the Party?

Thanks this poem gave me a great idea. Love you babe xoxo

Great style, and a beutiful idea. it reminds me of that song "what colour is the wind". love it

Ruby

Hey suzie, this poem was really beautifully written. I really enjoyed
reading it specially the beginning
and ending. you're so talented.
much love,
marjan

Good rhyming, but i think it lacked rhythm at times, but stil, i'll give it 4/5

Such a short poem yet if it was any longer the feeling would be lost
perfectly written
keep it up
I love your work
xxx

Sweeetttttt. loved it!!