Aww that was so sweet, and i loved the rhyming, the flow was really good, and you did an awesome job, see the thing about the voting is its always inaccurate, i mean this poem should ATLEAST be a 4.6 rating, but since I gave it a 5/5, it only increased it to 4.2, but really it was an awesome poem, i'd give it a 10 if i could,

How many times have we all been in that situation? great poem great subject good job

Hey girl this is awsome! i love it i have one like that but it's called passing by him and it's different of course just keep up the good work!!♥