Hey whats poppin i think thats really good u got sum talent i give u a 5/5
keep ya head up
*kristina*

"You say you want to die,
but that's all a lie.
I think that's really dumb,
STOP!! acting like a bum."

i like that... it is true in most cases, great job... i hope everything is ok... or that it got better... (don't know how long ago you published this poem or how long ago you wrote it) great job still... i don't believe you are an amateur.. it seems like you got your own way of writing and i like it (personally)

-love whitney